Take Heart 30 October 2013

Posted Tuesday, October 29, 2013 in Culture

Take Heart 30 October 2013

A Conversation in Poetry

Edited and Introduced by Wesley McNair, Maine Poet Laureate


Shooting a deer is a common rite of initiation for boys in Maine. But in today’s sonnet, by Thomas Carper of Cornish, the initiation has gone very wrong.


The Solemn Son

by Thomas Carper


“It’s his.” They’ll weigh it out behind the store.

Harry Nason writes the boy’s name, Steve

Burnell. The boy looks solemnly at the floor,

Trying to work it out. It’s hard to believe

That in one deafening moment in the woods,

At daybreak, as he shivered from the cold,

So much could change. He overhears his dad’s

Words as Harry has the story told.

“Two shots…the heart.” He’d hardly time to see

The buck before the crashing blasts that killed

Him rang in his ears so overpoweringly

That just when he was sure he’d be fulfilled

He felt dazed and deserted. Now the son

Hears Harry’s voice from miles away. “Well done.”


Take Heart: A Conversation in Poetry is produced in collaboration with the Maine Writers & Publishers Alliance. Poem copyright © 2003 Thomas Carper. Reprinted from The Maine Poets, Down East Books, 2003, by permission of Thomas Carper. Questions about submitting to Take Heart may be directed to Gibson Fay-LeBlanc, Special Consultant to the Maine Poet Laureate, at mainepoetlaureate@gmail.com or 207-228-8263. Take Heart: Poems from Maine, an anthology collecting the first two years of this column, is now available from Down East Books.

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